First Speech

Topic:I'd Like Some Help With My Conclusion.

Intro:I have problem with particular part of a paper that is conclusion.
Thesis statement:what are problems about my conclusions, and how to solve these problem.

Body:

1.My conclusions'problems
a.Stress the thesis statement
b.summize the body paragraphes

2.How to solve these problem
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/conclude.html

Suggestions

Answer the question "So What?"
Show your readers why this paper was important. Show them that your paper was meaningful and useful.

Synthesize, don't summarize

Don't simply repeat things that were in your paper. They have read it. Show them how the points you made and the support and examples you used were not random, but fit together.
Redirect your readers

Give your reader something to think about, perhaps a way to use your paper in the "real" world. If your introduction went from general to specific, make your conclusion go from specific to general. Think globally.

Create a new meaning
You don't have to give new information to create a new meaning. By demonstrating how your ideas work together, you can create a new picture. Often the sum of the paper is worth more than its parts.