Do you know what global communication is? “Global communication is the process of transmitting and receiving information on a world-wide scale.”[1] Maybe many people do not know what global communication is. However, global communication is very important for people, and it changed peoples’ culture and business.
First of all, why global communication is very important for people? Because of communication changed peoples’ life and it give people some benefits. Then I give you some examples. Ten years ago people could use internet. People could search information on the internet; people could use e-mail to send mails; people could use some software to communicate with friends or relatives. However, people just could use internet in their country. Nowadays, because of global communication internet becomes international, people can find more and more information on the internet; people can communicate with other people that come from different countries on the internet; people make friends on internet from different countries.
Global communication advances culture communication. Why global communication advances culture communication? Studying abroad is a way of globalization. Nowadays many students choose study abroad. Students go to other country for study abroad that can learn a lot things not only academic knowledge. The students abroad can learn different culture. For example, students abroad can learn different language; student abroad can learn life style; students abroad different campus culture; students abroad can learn different history. Students abroad who come from different countries can study together and live together. In 2010, there were three hundred thousand Chinese students go abroad for study. However, in 2000 there were hundred thousand Chinese students go abroad for study. Olympic Games are the most important part of global communication for human. Olympic Game is held every four years. Now, more and more countries join Olympic Games. It makes people from different countries that can get together. People can know more languages, knowledge, history and culture about other countries. There 205 countries joined 2008 Beijing Olympic Games. In 2000 Sydney Olympic Games, there 190 countries joined. There two example show you why global communication advances culture communication.
Global communication also advances business development. Ten years ago people called business just “Business”, but now people call business “International Business”. Because of global communication that business changed in these ten years. International business advances the national economy development. Globalization brings abundant resources from other countries through the way of export and import.
In conclusion, global communication changed peoples’ life, culture and business. It also advances human development. In my opinion, global communication is speeded up in our lives. It makes our lives better than before.
[1]: http://wiki.media-culture.org.au/index.php/Global_Communication
Monday, January 31, 2011
Tuesday, January 25, 2011
outline
Topic: What is global communication and how has it promoted the globalization witnessed in the past ten years?
Introduction:
1. Hock: Do you know what global communication is? “Global communication is the process of transmitting and receiving information on a world-wide scale.”[1]
2. Thesis statement: Global communication is very important for people, and it changed peoples’ culture and business.
Body Paragraph:
1. Importance
a. Examples global communication’s benefits
Using the Internet-E-mail, Skype.
b. Why global communication is very important for people?
2. Culture
a. Culture communication
Comparison 2000 and 2010
3. Business
a. Business became “International business”
b. Comparison 2000 and 2010
Conclusion:
1. Stress the thesis statement
2. My opinion-Global communication is good for people.
[1]: http://wiki.media-culture.org.au/index.php/Global_Communication
Introduction:
1. Hock: Do you know what global communication is? “Global communication is the process of transmitting and receiving information on a world-wide scale.”[1]
2. Thesis statement: Global communication is very important for people, and it changed peoples’ culture and business.
Body Paragraph:
1. Importance
a. Examples global communication’s benefits
Using the Internet-E-mail, Skype.
b. Why global communication is very important for people?
2. Culture
a. Culture communication
Comparison 2000 and 2010
3. Business
a. Business became “International business”
b. Comparison 2000 and 2010
Conclusion:
1. Stress the thesis statement
2. My opinion-Global communication is good for people.
[1]: http://wiki.media-culture.org.au/index.php/Global_Communication
First Speech
Topic:I'd Like Some Help With My Conclusion.
Intro:I have problem with particular part of a paper that is conclusion.
Thesis statement:what are problems about my conclusions, and how to solve these problem.
Body:
1.My conclusions'problems
a.Stress the thesis statement
b.summize the body paragraphes
2.How to solve these problem
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/conclude.html
Suggestions
Answer the question "So What?"
Show your readers why this paper was important. Show them that your paper was meaningful and useful.
Synthesize, don't summarize
Don't simply repeat things that were in your paper. They have read it. Show them how the points you made and the support and examples you used were not random, but fit together.
Redirect your readers
Give your reader something to think about, perhaps a way to use your paper in the "real" world. If your introduction went from general to specific, make your conclusion go from specific to general. Think globally.
Create a new meaning
You don't have to give new information to create a new meaning. By demonstrating how your ideas work together, you can create a new picture. Often the sum of the paper is worth more than its parts.
Intro:I have problem with particular part of a paper that is conclusion.
Thesis statement:what are problems about my conclusions, and how to solve these problem.
Body:
1.My conclusions'problems
a.Stress the thesis statement
b.summize the body paragraphes
2.How to solve these problem
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/conclude.html
Suggestions
Answer the question "So What?"
Show your readers why this paper was important. Show them that your paper was meaningful and useful.
Synthesize, don't summarize
Don't simply repeat things that were in your paper. They have read it. Show them how the points you made and the support and examples you used were not random, but fit together.
Redirect your readers
Give your reader something to think about, perhaps a way to use your paper in the "real" world. If your introduction went from general to specific, make your conclusion go from specific to general. Think globally.
Create a new meaning
You don't have to give new information to create a new meaning. By demonstrating how your ideas work together, you can create a new picture. Often the sum of the paper is worth more than its parts.
Tuesday, January 18, 2011
winner
1,best Holker, Alexandra http://alexandraholkeren191s11.blogspot.com/
2,2nd best Lu Shan http://lush1001.blogspot.com/
3,third best Beibei Wei http://beibeiwei0420.blogspot.com/
2,2nd best Lu Shan http://lush1001.blogspot.com/
3,third best Beibei Wei http://beibeiwei0420.blogspot.com/
Monday, January 17, 2011
Second Draft
It is an amazing story. This story is about me. I forget to tell you who I am. First, I introduce myself. My name is Hui. I am an Indian. I live near the Mississippi river. Mississippi river is a big river in the North American. It is like a big dragon lie on the earth. I have a nice canoe. My father and I made it. I always take my canoe, and catch fish on the Mississippi river. I like eating fish, because fish is very delicious.
One day after I catch fish, I beat my hand drum and walk near the Mississippi river. I am very happy, because today I got many fishes. When I walked near the Mississippi river, I saw a black man. The man looks like an African. He is very tall, and he has big lobes. He stood near a house and looks like pray. The house is white and small, but it is a beautiful house. I went to there, and talked with the black man. “Hello.” I said. The black man looked at me and said hello.
“Where are you from and what is your name?” I asked him.
“My name is Yunfei Hua, and I am from North Africa. I do not know how I can come here. It was like a dream.” He said.
“Wow! It sounds like amazing. Why do you stand in front of this white house?” I said.
“Do you think this house looks strange?” He asked me.
“Yes! It is not the Indian house, and I never see this house.” I said.
“Yes. Do want to follow me and go into to this house?” He asked me.
“Of course!” I said.
Then Hua and I went into the house. When we came into the house, we saw a big box. On the box we saw some words. It is an amazing box, and it has magic!
“Can we open this box?” I asked.
“If you want you can open it.” Hua said.
“Sure! Let us open it” I said.
Hua and I open this big box. When we opened this big box, we saw a lot of things. I saw a small dish, it looks like Indian dish, but I am not sure what this is. Then I found a glass jar. It is small, buy it is beautiful. I open the glass jar and found three nuts in this jar. The nuts are dark brown. Hua said the nuts call chestnut. At the bottom of this box I saw a small blanket. It looks very beautiful. At this time I found some words under the blanket. “There is a door under the box. You can find some things. First, you need to use a ruler open the door.” When we saw this, we moved this box and found a door. However, we need a key that is the ruler. We tried to find the ruler. I walked around in this room. Hua went to one corner, and he yelled I found the ruler, we can open this door! Then we move the big box and opened this door.
After open the door we went into another room. This room is very small. We saw a small box in the room. Then we open this small box. When we opened this small box, we saw a small wooden head. It scares us. Except the wooden head we found a wallet. A wallet! What this is!
At this times me weak up. It is a dream, and this is an amazing dream!
One day after I catch fish, I beat my hand drum and walk near the Mississippi river. I am very happy, because today I got many fishes. When I walked near the Mississippi river, I saw a black man. The man looks like an African. He is very tall, and he has big lobes. He stood near a house and looks like pray. The house is white and small, but it is a beautiful house. I went to there, and talked with the black man. “Hello.” I said. The black man looked at me and said hello.
“Where are you from and what is your name?” I asked him.
“My name is Yunfei Hua, and I am from North Africa. I do not know how I can come here. It was like a dream.” He said.
“Wow! It sounds like amazing. Why do you stand in front of this white house?” I said.
“Do you think this house looks strange?” He asked me.
“Yes! It is not the Indian house, and I never see this house.” I said.
“Yes. Do want to follow me and go into to this house?” He asked me.
“Of course!” I said.
Then Hua and I went into the house. When we came into the house, we saw a big box. On the box we saw some words. It is an amazing box, and it has magic!
“Can we open this box?” I asked.
“If you want you can open it.” Hua said.
“Sure! Let us open it” I said.
Hua and I open this big box. When we opened this big box, we saw a lot of things. I saw a small dish, it looks like Indian dish, but I am not sure what this is. Then I found a glass jar. It is small, buy it is beautiful. I open the glass jar and found three nuts in this jar. The nuts are dark brown. Hua said the nuts call chestnut. At the bottom of this box I saw a small blanket. It looks very beautiful. At this time I found some words under the blanket. “There is a door under the box. You can find some things. First, you need to use a ruler open the door.” When we saw this, we moved this box and found a door. However, we need a key that is the ruler. We tried to find the ruler. I walked around in this room. Hua went to one corner, and he yelled I found the ruler, we can open this door! Then we move the big box and opened this door.
After open the door we went into another room. This room is very small. We saw a small box in the room. Then we open this small box. When we opened this small box, we saw a small wooden head. It scares us. Except the wooden head we found a wallet. A wallet! What this is!
At this times me weak up. It is a dream, and this is an amazing dream!
Tuesday, January 11, 2011
Story
This story is about me. It is an amazing story. I forget to tell you who I am. First, I introduce myself. My name is Hui. I am an Indian. I live near the Mississippi river. Mississippi river is a big river in the North American. It is like a big dragon lie on the earth. I have a nice canoe. My father and I made it. I always take my canoe, and catch fish on the Mississippi river. I like eating fish, because fish is very delicious.
One day after I catch fish, I beat my hand drum and walk near the Mississippi river. I am very happy, because today I got many fishes. When I walked near the Mississippi river, I saw a black man. The man looks like an African. He is very tall, and he has big lobes. He stood near a house and looks like pray. The house is white and small, but it is a beautiful house. I went to there, and talked with the black man. “Hello.” I said. The black man looked at me and said hello.
“Where are you from and what is your name?” I asked him.
“My name is Yunfei Hua, and I am from North Africa. I do not know how I can come here. It was like a dream.” He said.
“Wow! It sounds like amazing. Why do you stand in front of this white house?” I said.
“Do you think this house looks strange?” He asked me.
“Yes! It is not the Indian house, and I never see this house.” I said.
“Yes. Do want to follow me and go into to this house?” He asked me.
“Of course!” I said.
Then Hua and I went into the house. When we came into the house, we saw a big box. On the box we saw some words. It is an amazing box, and it has magic!
“Can we open this box?” I asked.
“If you want you can open it.” Hua said.
“Sure! Let us open it” I said.
Hua and I open this big box. When we opened this bid box, we saw a lot of things. I saw a small dish, it looks like Indian dish, but I am not sure what this is. Then I found a glass jar. It is small, buy it is beautiful. I open the glass jar and found three nuts in this jar. The nuts are dark brown. Hua said the nuts call chestnut. At the bottom of this box I saw a small blanket. It looks very beautiful. At this time I found some words under the blanket. “There is a door under the box. You can find some things. First, you need to use a ruler open the door.” When we saw this, we moved this box and found a door. However, we need a key that is the ruler. Hua went to one corner, and he yelled I found the ruler, we can open this door! Then we move the big box and opened this door.
After open the door we went into another room. This room is very small. We saw a small box in the room. Then we open this small box. When we opened this small box, we saw a small wooden head. It scares us. Except the wooden head we found a wallet. A wallet! What this is!
At this times me weak up. It is a dream, and this is an amazing dream!
One day after I catch fish, I beat my hand drum and walk near the Mississippi river. I am very happy, because today I got many fishes. When I walked near the Mississippi river, I saw a black man. The man looks like an African. He is very tall, and he has big lobes. He stood near a house and looks like pray. The house is white and small, but it is a beautiful house. I went to there, and talked with the black man. “Hello.” I said. The black man looked at me and said hello.
“Where are you from and what is your name?” I asked him.
“My name is Yunfei Hua, and I am from North Africa. I do not know how I can come here. It was like a dream.” He said.
“Wow! It sounds like amazing. Why do you stand in front of this white house?” I said.
“Do you think this house looks strange?” He asked me.
“Yes! It is not the Indian house, and I never see this house.” I said.
“Yes. Do want to follow me and go into to this house?” He asked me.
“Of course!” I said.
Then Hua and I went into the house. When we came into the house, we saw a big box. On the box we saw some words. It is an amazing box, and it has magic!
“Can we open this box?” I asked.
“If you want you can open it.” Hua said.
“Sure! Let us open it” I said.
Hua and I open this big box. When we opened this bid box, we saw a lot of things. I saw a small dish, it looks like Indian dish, but I am not sure what this is. Then I found a glass jar. It is small, buy it is beautiful. I open the glass jar and found three nuts in this jar. The nuts are dark brown. Hua said the nuts call chestnut. At the bottom of this box I saw a small blanket. It looks very beautiful. At this time I found some words under the blanket. “There is a door under the box. You can find some things. First, you need to use a ruler open the door.” When we saw this, we moved this box and found a door. However, we need a key that is the ruler. Hua went to one corner, and he yelled I found the ruler, we can open this door! Then we move the big box and opened this door.
After open the door we went into another room. This room is very small. We saw a small box in the room. Then we open this small box. When we opened this small box, we saw a small wooden head. It scares us. Except the wooden head we found a wallet. A wallet! What this is!
At this times me weak up. It is a dream, and this is an amazing dream!
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